Lmcgallion

I took my stories down for editing.  Found there were issues throughout.  Thanks.

TheStoryScholar

Hey, thanks for following! What kind of stories you working on?

Lmcgallion

@StoryCoach thank you i will. 
            As far as my aspirations with writing. It can best explained in an analogy. 
            Have you ever been the butt of a joke and not known it?
            That peer review is my marker. Or even lack of it. 
            My lack of confidence comes from the fact i have never had any formal education, see bio to understand, ask me anything tecnical i will answers with certainly. Ask anything grammatical and i cannot answer.  Writing is my learning tool and is now also a passion.
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TheStoryScholar

@Lmcgallion If you’re serious about wanting to make a living off of writing (unless it’s just a creative outlet for you), you should get a copy of “Techniques of the Selling Writer” by Dwight V. Swain. It’s worth every penny and comes with a wealth of how-to. Besides, it’s old school, which is what I love about it. No gimmicks.
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Lmcgallion

@StoryCoach i can appreciate the day job thing. I am building my own home and my boss (wife) is a hard nose for productivity.
            The  feedback is  what led me here. Finding you was very serendipitous. Thank you btw. A world of knowledge and insightful advice.
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Lmcgallion

Thank you for reading. The Tesla power generating pier.  My goal in writing this was to explain the circuit/ process in a manner people could see it. 
          
          Hoping to find people who will share it. Or has the ability to evaluate and implement. It is my design but, I hold no interest in controlling it. 
          
          Hoping that one spark can ignite the flames of change.  
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/339736582