Lo1k_diamonds

Hello ~ le me just finished another Far Cry chapter and came to this place in the story where Aaden and Maya have some unresolved issues and I wonder... Should I add a scene where they figure things out, or does that feel too out of scope, seeing as Far Cry is about Leah and Jungkook? Hmmm

Lo1k_diamonds

@momobear4u hi, thank you for giving me your perspective! I agree, I think there's already way too much going on, it would slow the pace and it is not the main focus :) thanks!!
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momobear4u

@Lo1k_diamonds since their story isn't one you delved into much, I don't know that adding something now would do much for the overall scope. At the end of the day, where I am as a reader in the story, I can already infer something is going on in their relationship without being explicitly told so. When the story ends, I'll probably infer again that they end up together. I think that's enough for me. 
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Lo1k_diamonds

Hello ~ le me just finished another Far Cry chapter and came to this place in the story where Aaden and Maya have some unresolved issues and I wonder... Should I add a scene where they figure things out, or does that feel too out of scope, seeing as Far Cry is about Leah and Jungkook? Hmmm

Lo1k_diamonds

@momobear4u hi, thank you for giving me your perspective! I agree, I think there's already way too much going on, it would slow the pace and it is not the main focus :) thanks!!
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momobear4u

@Lo1k_diamonds since their story isn't one you delved into much, I don't know that adding something now would do much for the overall scope. At the end of the day, where I am as a reader in the story, I can already infer something is going on in their relationship without being explicitly told so. When the story ends, I'll probably infer again that they end up together. I think that's enough for me. 
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sd_luvs_bangtan

MERRY CHRISTMAS! I hope you're doing well! Miss Far Cry, but i know you need time to make it what you want!! ♥️♥️

Lo1k_diamonds

@sd_luvs_bangtan ;_; you're too good to me!!! <3
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sd_luvs_bangtan

@sd_luvs_bangtan You don't need luck! Just time and no pressure... You're pretty close to brilliant, soooooooooo YOU GOT THIS!
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Lo1k_diamonds

@sd_luvs_bangtan Woah, you remembered me? ;_;  Merry Christmas!! Thank you for remembering and missing Far Cry; I've been waiting for the holidays precisely to write, so wish me luck!! <3
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Lo1k_diamonds

Did I write one extra Far Cry chapter? Yes. Does that mean there will be 12 instead of 11 chapters? Yup, for now. Will that screw up the posting schedule? Probably. Will I start writing Tae's chapter next? Yes.

Lo1k_diamonds

@Arait007 *.* thank you... Hopefully I don't keep adding chaps though lol :D
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Arait007

@Lo1k_diamonds you had me at 'extra'... no complaints here if that means more of this amazing story!!
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sd_luvs_bangtan

D-1?? 

Lo1k_diamonds

@sd_luvs_bangtan Thank you! I've never written ABO before and I had to write and make sense of a general plot given to me, so... I'm kind of nervous about it ^^'
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sd_luvs_bangtan

@Lo1k_diamonds I'm also looking forward to Be As It Must! I <3 good ABO, and that looks amazing! (:
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sd_luvs_bangtan

Is it really only 8 days until part 3 starts? No pressure, because I'm certain you have a life outside my desperate ass... How's your puppy?

Lo1k_diamonds

@sd_luvs_bangtan ahahah, that's crazy :D Funny you should say that :p I think we will :D
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sd_luvs_bangtan

@Lo1k_diamonds Soooooooooo crazy!!! A spray bottle is my biggest ally!! I'm excited for what's next, and I  hope we'll find out something about Yoongi... 
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Lo1k_diamonds

I might delete this later but I need to get it out of my chest - I'm re reading Far Cry to get ready to write part 3 and omfg there are soooooooooo many mistakes  like, I'm not a native English speaker and it's not like they're perfect either cause I work with natives at times and they make mistakes too, but FML. It's not like it's unreadable, but it doesn't flow beautifully at times and  :'( And I might be exaggerating, but I was raised by Virgos; typo is just another word for failure, okay?  T_T
          Like I'm one second away from just not writing it and re editing the whole thing like jklvlbkvlcldusi :( *sigh*

Lo1k_diamonds

@momobear4u ;_; at least you skip over them naturally, so they don't ruin the story ;_; you are, thank you so much <3 I kept reading and it gets better, so crisis averted, I swear  I hope I can start writing this weekend, I'm excited! :) 
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Lo1k_diamonds

@Arait007 ;_; that's good, that’s important! Thank you!
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momobear4u

@Lo1k_diamonds I agree with your other readers. Your writing is so good! I'm an English speaker and I barely notice any mistakes. If there are typos, it's the usual ones most people make when in a hurry writing. My mind skips over them while I'm reading because I'm so engrossed in the story. You know how invested I am because I swear I must comment the most in Far Cry.
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sd_luvs_bangtan

I woke up today so excited because I thought "only a month to Far Cry!"  After the mental math I realized I'm 2 months away... It's like waking up thinking it's Friday, when it's only Wednesday... 
          
          *sigh*  I truly hope you're enjoying your time away! MISS YOU!

Lo1k_diamonds

@sd_luvs_bangtan Sweetest monsters is definitely a good way to put it eheheh Mine doesn't let me near her with a brush, she runs away T-T But I am enjoying it, challenge and all :) (and don't worry about it, autocorrect sucks, i hate it too :p)
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sd_luvs_bangtan

@Lo1k_diamonds!! I totally typed your user name correctly... sometimes I hate my phone!
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sd_luvs_bangtan

@Li1k_diamonds  congratulations on your new puppy!! Enjoy it! I got 2 kittens 5 months ago, and they are the sweetest monsters ever! Took them for their first grooming today, and it was adorable!
            
            I'll occupy my time the next couple months by re-reading the masterpiece that is Far Cry... Keep getting rest, and love the new puppy.  
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JvsrmArmy

Hey! Abt yo start reading your stories and I'm sure I'd love them. Was just wondering if you plan on making more reader insert stories.

JvsrmArmy

@Lo1k_diamonds yes sure we'd love them a lot! pls consider it!!
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Lo1k_diamonds

@JvsrmArmy Hi! I have many more reader insert stories! Most of my oneshots are reader insert; without counting Too Sweet, I have 7 others, they're just not posted here :/ Should I add them here? :/
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WildRift363

Hi Arthur nim, so I was really curious how did you ended up becoming a fan of bts?

WildRift363

@WildRift363 thanks for your response and that's really interesting and fascinating for me cause I'm a Lerner and I love learning about new things and so I got curious about Portugal and thank you so so much that you share that with me it really means so much to me:) but if you don't mind so I like to learn something about you too can you tell me what are your hobbies or what you like to do:)
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Lo1k_diamonds

@WildRift363 Hi! It's hard to just say random things about it like that!  But fascinating... Portugal is one of the oldest countries in the world, we'll forever argue with Spain who actually circumvented the world first (as the two biggest naval powerhouses in the world at the time), our most famous dishes use codfish, and although we have a huge coast and islands, we don't even fish cod in our shores or the Atlantic , we had a tsunami back in 1755 and had to rebuild our capital (Lisbon) because of it, our last king was murdered while on a public car ride, then we had a time with a dictatorship during WW2, then we rebelled, and now we have a republic, and most people know us now because of football, because of Cristiano Ronaldo or the coach Mourinho, for example. Our wine is pretty good too, I love Port wine (but I'm biased, of course :p)
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WildRift363

@WildRift363 hi again, so I researched on Portugal and found that it's a really really beautiful country and now I really want to know more about that please can you tell me about some fascinating facts about Portugal please I request:)
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