L0tus16
Hi I just written a rafe ff and I was hoping to gain feedback to make sure I’m meeting the audience like u expectations
LocalR3ader
So far I really like the way you are introducing Aj to the rest of the group, but the only like problem is the story flow. I feel like it’s very weird in places where the dialogue is, and I feel like that can improve. But otherwise I like how your story is so far!
