Loilala

Hey guys! I have started writing a book 'the story which never began......'  hope you all like it! And I would be glad to know your review on it.

madusa1303

Hii thank you for your vote.. I hope you are enjoying it... Plz let me know your thoughts as well 

Loilala

But I really like your story 
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Loilala

Hey I think your doing great but would appreciate if you add a bit of cheesy (maybe him becoming jealous and then fighting for her which indirectly leads to  part in the next plot it'll keep the story balanced 
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