Hebron's Place

Hello po. Still listening your free webinar. Thanks po sa pagshare ng inyong ideas. 
           

Hey, guys!  Lowluh is back with a new story na gusto kong ipa-beta read.  Ito po ay hybrid ng isang novel at movie script format.  Baka curious kayong makita ang scene 1.  It's a fanfiction na psychological thriller na ang bida ay sina Julia Baretto, Gerald Anderson, Angel Aquino, Joshua Garcia, at Charlie Dizon.
          
          Let me know if you want to be my beta readers, so I can give you the details ng trabahong gagawin natin together at kapag agree kayo sa payment na kaya kong ibigay.  Salamat!
          
          Warning!  May adult content po ito, so if mati-trigger ka, please don't read po ;). Salamat!

Thank you my beta reader for this critique.  Super insightful and totoo, mas magaling kang critique ngayon kesa nung first time.  Ibig sabihin, you are getting better at soon mas gagaling ka pa lalong maging writer.  Kasi dun lang naman tayo nag-umpisang matutong magsulat, kapag may nababasa tayong nakaka-inspire sa atin.
          
          Wala siyang spoiler sa pag-critique which is nice.  You may want to read po 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1140677690-my-own-critique-review-gusto-ko-lang-mag-kwento?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=psycheink&wp_originator=TpvDcQy6CDQOGck0cuU5Ozbf6fKjTzY2HRb%2Bl6HEG0kH6zbFFvVq5mUUW6O1pROEBlhXTGUkX0XUgUj5MD%2B2EZkgsLz%2F07DaDDMY5jarxgj2TGhouJhwjE4zdekakbHG
          
          Salamat po sa mga nagbabasa pa rin ng NEVER BEEN TO ME - My Watty 2021 entry!

Thanks so much po for commenting on this story.  I know, sorry po sa mga na-confused at nasasaktan sa takbo ng story. For Alpha readers, pansinin nyo po na walang kontrabida sa story na ito.  It's a type of writing na ang mga characters ang enemy ng isa't-isa.  They are their own personal demons kumbaga.  This is also my play around sa paggawa ng morally ambiguous characters.  Yung characters na you love to hate and you hate to love.   Also this is a one POV all throughout, unlike yung mga bagong style na may multiple POV's so yung mga nakakamiss ng 1st person voice pero isang POV lang, this story is perfect for your research. Hindi po ito as polished pa, pero I believe that it's worth the read.  Don't give up reading po kahit masakit, I promise it will be worth it po.  Salamat po sa votes at sa mga naglapag ng comments.  Mwahh!  Sa mga beta readers, lapag lang po ng comments coz I have gifts for you!  Paramdam po kung nakanino ang baso (charot!)
          
          Sa mga hindi pa po nakakabasa ito po ang link. Enjoy!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/285802294-never-been-to-me

Hey guys, Lolakwentosera here.  Salamat po sa pagbabasa ng Never Been To Me.  From #47 sa Christian stories, pumasok po tayo sa #8 dahil sa suporta nyo.  I entered this story sa Watty 2021 hehe, try lang.  Salamat po sa pagtangkilik.  Kung medyo masakit po, pasensya na ha.  Hindi po kasi ito romcom but new adult love story po, tackling mental health issues, pero kapit lang po -- pagkatapos ng sakit eh meron naman pong satisfying ending ito hehe.  Ito po ang link sa mga curious makita ang takbo ng istoya. https://www.wattpad.com/story/285802294-never-been-to-me

Hey guys, Lolakwentosera here.  I just uploaded my latest novel - Never Been To Me. Complete na po ito at hindi kayo mabibitin. If you liked my LEAGA novel, Two Less Lonely People In The World, this one is more jampacked with kilig, iyak, steamy scenes, and lessons in life.  Hope you can add this to your reading list habang free pa po : - ). I wrote this novel in 2008, hindi pa ako masyadong aral sa pagsusulat noon.  Medyo I updated it for this year, hindi pa sya as polished, pero gusto ko nang i-share sa inyo before pa sya lumabas as published printed book in 2022.  I'm still polishing for traditional publication because I'm only allowed 60k words and this novel ran at about double that, so enjoy po and let me know what you think! Salamat!

@KikoMakata 

Hi amy  welcome sa watty

mommmy welcome sa wattpad im so proudd #1 supporter here