LolangFuriosoPM

Another Update to the Book! Trying a new point of view for this part, so let me know if its any better or worse. Don't worry if you preferred the previous form, I'm going back to it for the next chapter. I mainly swapped to 1st Person because Irvettes truly alone in this chapter.
          	
          	So, hopefully you guys enjoy and I'll see you in another week! :D

LolangFuriosoPM

Also I will say I made so many mistakes when writing, so let me know of any I missed out on correcting please T-T.
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LolangFuriosoPM

Another Update to the Book! Trying a new point of view for this part, so let me know if its any better or worse. Don't worry if you preferred the previous form, I'm going back to it for the next chapter. I mainly swapped to 1st Person because Irvettes truly alone in this chapter.
          
          So, hopefully you guys enjoy and I'll see you in another week! :D

LolangFuriosoPM

Also I will say I made so many mistakes when writing, so let me know of any I missed out on correcting please T-T.
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DiyuTheInferno

So, what do you want the irvette to be like? I haven't drawn her until you gave out the art your friend made lol. So what should she do in the fanart of your oc?

LolangFuriosoPM

@DiyuTheInferno You can do whatever you like really, maybe carving something since that’s one of her favorite things to do. But really you can take liberty to do whatever ever you want XD.
            
            Mainly just keep in mind her general appearance, and that her expression is always just kind of exhausted as well, besides that go nuts :).
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LolangFuriosoPM

Another week, another crappy update, and another report for Irvette Bellbin. :D
          
          Sorry for posting so late, got caught up on the grind! So, hopefully its still just as good for y'all. Also, got a little surprise waiting in the new Report courtesy from one of my talented friends. Enjoy!

LolangFuriosoPM

The next chapter is up! Posting a bit early to make the once a week post on Sunday instead of Monday. Just feel like it's a better day to post on for people to read. Hope y'all enjoy it! I did two once overs but may have missed a few things. So let me know if I missed something! :D

DiyuTheInferno

I wanna draw your cute lil archer.
          
          Give me ideas for her appearance.
          N o w

LolangFuriosoPM

@DiyuTheInferno I did actually imagine her with her hair up considering she'd need to keep it out of her face :D.
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DiyuTheInferno

@LolangFuriosoPM then I'll draw her hair up to her shoulders.
            And dirty... Oh... Yes... I'll mostly draw her hair as a ponytail or hairbun (my beloved).
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LolangFuriosoPM

I will say if you wanna draw her, maybe wait a few more chapters until the next Report on her. That’ll be a good description I feel, I’ll also leave a drawing one of my friends did for reference.
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DiyuTheInferno

Oh yeah I realized something.
          
          You usually use 7000+ word count right?
          
          If I remember correctly.
          
          Average Korean novel account for chapters are 2.5k~5k.
          
          That mean you are overworking yourself D:
          
          

DiyuTheInferno

@LolangFuriosoPM you're as evil as KJH trying to make Literates.
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LolangFuriosoPM

@DiyuTheInferno I am hoping that's a compliment XD.
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DiyuTheInferno

@LolangFuriosoPM I feel like you are making me a literate 
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LolangFuriosoPM

I am back with a chapter! The official start of the Fixer Arc, hopefully it's decent. I'll probably move to weekly updates for this arc to give me some breathing room. Allow me to come up with ideas and then write them to how I like. Let me know what can be improved! And as mentioned, if you have anything you'd love to see feel free to let me know! 
          
          Till then, thanks for reading. :D

LolangFuriosoPM

@DiyuTheInferno I usually take a break after a chapter, write until I'm finished with maybe some breaks, then do a once over reading it myself. Then post it, because I don't see a reason to post it some time after finishing unless I get it done early.
            
            That's just how I do it though. :3
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DiyuTheInferno

@LolangFuriosoPM now time to actually read your story.
            
            Yay.
            My rec is to have a small 2 day break before actually posting... Or be crazy af like me and post
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LolangFuriosoPM

Ok, just to let you guys know, might not be posting today or tomorrow, not because I'm stumped on what to write, just mainly because I'm playing my games and want a bit of a break, I will most likely post once 7 days have passed since the last post though! Making it a weekly upload. If that changes you'll be the first to know, besides that though, just didn't wanna leave you in the dark. :3

DiyuTheInferno

@LolangFuriosoPM me when my other version don't get the 0.00001% mythical gesr
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LolangFuriosoPM

@DiyuTheInferno Sort of, Irvette in PM is a characters whose main theme is what it’s like living in the city for the average person. Granted she’s not average herself, but when she starts out she definitely is average.
            
            It’s only after the smoke war when she begins closing the gap with augments, experience and more gear. Beyond that though, life in the city is more of a gamble at points, with your life most commonly being on the line. 
            
            And let’s just say, Irvette's luck didn’t come from nowhere. And other versions of her aren’t as lucky as she is.
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LolangFuriosoPM

Chapter 7 Is now up and ready for viewing! Did a once over to fix anything I didn't like, so hopefully the sentences flow well. And hopefully, as always I did a good job, let me know what y'all think!

LolangFuriosoPM

I would love to do that but sometimes I feel it’s necessary to put things together rather than space them out into several sentences, if you have an idea for what could work instead I’d love the suggestion.
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DiyuTheInferno

@LolangFuriosoPM I have a suggestion, can you please sometimes not make too much wall of texts?
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DiyuTheInferno

@LolangFuriosoPM lovely, I am still at chapter 4 because of the Wattpad ads in the app...
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