LonLyP01

Hi! It's me again so I just updated the rewrite of the 
          	
          	nano machine son 
          	
          	This is the bio/info chapter and it important because it have the background of the main character.and their update power also new character. 
          	
          	Please give it a try and leave your comment for me. I very much appreciate it.

LonLyP01

Hi! It's me again so I just updated the rewrite of the 
          
          nano machine son 
          
          This is the bio/info chapter and it important because it have the background of the main character.and their update power also new character. 
          
          Please give it a try and leave your comment for me. I very much appreciate it.

JeidoRaikannoIkari

In Monster Manual Deku do you think that there is anything that I could add to the latest chapter 

LonLyP01

@JeidoRaikannoIkari I couldn't say anything about the stories yet. Because I read it a while ago. And I still didn't read the newest chap yet. Sorry 
            
            
            But I'll give you some of the monster ideas.
            
            
            I don't know if you have this yet but maybe some undead monster like lich or death knight.
            
            Maybe an insect humanoid monster.
            
            
            Some monsters with mental attacks.
            
            Maybe some monsters that can summon minions.
            
            That's all I have for now. Good luck buddy sorry if I can't help you much.
            
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DanielMaxwell358

I already know that you're probably going to ignore this idea for Izuku Quirk it is called Arceus System- it's a Pokemon RPG quirk give Izuku Ability to not only enter any Pokemon Raid(Max Raid and Tera Raid Battles) Izuku can catch them too also Izuku is the only one that can see Pokemon outside the raids the only way anyone else would be able to not only see the Pokemon but catch it and keep it if Izuku add that person to his party the user can only add up to three people to Izuku party( with one for all Izuku can have seven people to his party)Izuku would also use the points that he made to buy different types of PokéBalls, Evolutionary Items, Recovery Items, Battle Effect Items, Berries, Hold Items, Dynamax Crystals, and Mega Stone from the Pokemark the stronger the Pokemon get the stronger Izuku becomes. Izuku would have to choose three starter Pokemon from Gen 1-9 fire, water, or Grass and receive a Z Ring and Key Stone Izuku activate this quirk for the first time.(this quirk is basic on Pokemon Ultra Sun and Ultra Moon, Pokemon sword and shield, Pokemon Legend Arceus, and Pokemon Scarlet and violet) please tell me if you like or not

DanielMaxwell358

Izuku quirk is a mix of Pokemon summon quirk, a RPG quirk, and Human daycare quirk also what three Pokemon will Izuku pick
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LonLyP01

@DanielMaxwell358 this....is good actually!!
            
            But well it may be too much to push in the one I work with  but if it is a new story it would be good thank.
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LonLyP01

Hey i just updated my new fanfic today.i think it kinda have a great start but that's not the topic.
          
          I want your opinion on what kind of weapon that you think suit each glyphs most
          
             There will be eight glyphs and I had a idea for two
          
             1.fire- Gauntlets.
             2.ice- armour.
             3.plant-????
             4.light-????
             5.darkness-?????
             6.earth-????
             7.wind-????
             8.thunder-????
          
          
          And what weapon ghost (amity palismans) should transform to? 
          
          
          Pls give me some of your opinion. Thanks guys
          
          Have a good day/night.

DarkPhoenixKing

@LonLyP01 It's your story, go nuts. I like your energy so far, so I'm excited to see how your stories develop. If you want to do a lance and shield though, maybe lightning and thunder. Slamming the shield to cause sonic thunder, and a lightning lance is always cool.
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LonLyP01

@DarkPhoenixKing that is very interesting. 
            
            But I had a plan to make a light weapon to a Lance and Shield though.
            
            But the light sword is cool too l kinda imagine it like a light saber from starwar.
            
            Thank you friend for your opinion. I appreciate it a lot.
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DarkPhoenixKing

@LonLyP01 top to bottom: vine whips, light sword, shadow daggers, stone ax, wind chakrams, and thunder hammer. Some are a bit generic, but they are staples for a reason. In the end you could do something interesting to give them more flavor like having cut sections of the whips act as snakes, hammer act as a lightning rod, or the chakrams multiply after being thrown. How this helps.
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