LondonGinger

I just wanted you to know that shifting sands was so good. I wish it was continued and not taken off. Hope you are loving your wattpad as much as I do!

Hey, when's your next update for Shifting Sands? Can't wait for more. :)

hey there! i've recently started a story and would love some feedback.....check it out on my page if you have time- thanks! ( i ask because i read your description and it sounded like you know what your talking about when it comes to writing)

I am going to get caught up with your story, no worries, mkay? I've just been busy doing everything but reading what I want. :)

Hey thanks for reading my story Arisen. Could you tell me what you thought of it?

ok hey jusr wondering if i like fantasy what would u recommend? running out of good reading. same with everyone who reads this. if u have any good fantasy reads let me know thanks

ok just read bout u and forthat im a fan. i agree totally bout fan fiction. if u like fantasy i have a story out there so whenever u can if u want look me up. anyway just bout to read ur works. ok done ranting bye

hey thanks for commenting and voting on end of the world: 2012. :D

I just saw your comment on my thread.  I understand that by chapter two everything is just starting to develop.  This is when Celestria finds out she's the last of five Dark magicians.  Once again I'd need the specifics as to what confused you, but after chapter three Celestria leaves her hometown and this is when the action starts to come.  (And along with action is magic as well)
          
          So if you truly believe there is potential, here's what I'll suggest: Try reading through chapter three and four.  In four a new character comes into the story, and judging from my other readers they've really liked him.  If you'd like to do that you could see what you think and then decide whether to continue or not.
          
          I'll gladly take a look at your book.  I have an app for Wattpad on my phone, so I can probably read it some time tonight or tomorrow morning.

She is having flashbacks in the first chapter.  I placed the past conversations in italics and since she's already said in narration that her sister is dead, I leave it to the readers to assume she is having flashbacks.
          
          As for first person point of view, everyone is entitled to their own opinion. Sorry to hear you don't like it so far, but to be honest you're the only one who's had that opinion. 
          Thanks for your comment :)