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@Lone-Grey-Knight I think you have a point there. From some of the other work I've read on people writing Mandalorians they're often very straight forward. It doesn't make them bad characters exactly that they're like that. You can have comedic moments with that simplicity though I'd argue there's elements from those characters people love even aspire to have. Like being sure of themselves 24/7 in your example. It's great to idolise those kind of characters but whether you relate to those characters I think is a separate matter. I'd like to think I've done well in caring for my characters to make them relatable in some fashion while also having parts of them that people can aspire to have.
            
            I did like your comment on Kancetto failing at one of the primary Mandalorian skills of close quarters combat. He's no slouch don't get me wrong but Silara is just that much better especially since she was trained by a master in hand-to-hand combat like Plo Koon.

@KancettoKryze absolutely it's been amazing so far I like the complexity, people write mandalorians to be so straight forward and sure if themselves but not even mandalore the great and etc were sure of themselves 24/7 it shows you care about your character

I hope you've been enjoying the story too.

Thank you, It means alot. If you want me to continue it, then im going off the rewrite of it

@Oculascheese not a problem, it was a good read keep writing I look forward to your future improvements more people need to understand how to balance a serious character "haddie" was wonderfully written

@Autobot-Stormblade LMAO

@Unoriginal_Jackass12 lmao yea I was gonna comment that when his kid basically told him off also just realized that this is the book where I commented "living up to your name I see" lmao 

@Autobot-Stormblade Ah thank you! And yeah...This book has more drama than a reality TV show. Lol.

@Electroprime0 I did the only thing I didn't really like was bring more people over from starwars but I can understand why you did it

@CommanderALFA  it was really good and original too

@ITA_ringhio it was a good book

What book was it in again and what chapter I’m ready but I can’t find the notification

Ok thanks!

@Dracoisamazing18 meh that's fine you can start up the mini story whenever you are ready

@cutegirl1483 Thanks love 

@cutegirl1483 hmmm sounds good I'll check it out