Kalaniclark091
Hey, Elderhaven’s vibe is actually haunting, in a good way. The whole idea of those visitors appearing during the storm and the town just accepting them for centuries is wild. It made me wonder… are they really a blessing, or something darker?
Lonewalker12
@Kalaniclark091 Yes it does make the things more interesting and yes some of the character may know more about the town's history more than they are admitting . I am planning to expand more on the visitors and their origin maybe with another story or a chapter but it may take a bit of time lol. I recently uploaded another story I think you may like that one as well its titled THE HARROW GLEN INVESTIGATION.
Kalaniclark091
@Lonewalker12 That actually makes it even more interesting, the idea that the “blessings” always come with a hidden cost is lowkey unsettling. It feels like the town knows more than they’re willing to admit. I’m curious, are you planning to expand more on the visitors or their origins later on? It feels like something readers would get really hooked on if explored deeper.
Lonewalker12
@Kalaniclark091 Hey, glad that you liked the idea and the concept of story. I wrote it a while back but posted it here today. As in the story the visitors are like these ancient beings who possess ancient knowledge not known to all citizens of Elderhaven. So you can its a bit of both they really do offer some blessings but with a curse.