Loni_Trash

Any one awake? I can’t sleep and I hate it I have school in 3 hours

LostInCake

Hi @Commander_Llamuz, I just published a new story and I'm looking for feedback, I would really appreciate if you could read it and write a comment if you like it! https://www.wattpad.com/story/98099816
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LostInCake

Thank you so muchthat means a lot!
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Loni_Trash

@LostInCake I think you did a great job on your story the spelling and grammar are pretty much perfect. You also did a amazing job at expressing how the characters felt and describing their emotions. I will be reading your story from now on.
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