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Hi Jehan!

I found your story great and marvelous! However you could've went day by day in Jenevy's life so it could be longer and more descriptive. Anyways, I like your style of writing! A sequel sounds like a great idea. Maybe Prom could be coming up. Jenevy and Dustin could be moving on with their relationship faster than what she wants to while Britney is cyberbullying Jenevy or something like that. You decide what feels comfortable. Youre the author anyways. Good luck! Let me know if this helps!

I published my first book!!! It's called " Something in the Mist". If you have any suggestions, please post them here as soon as possible. I could really use the advice. Should I make more chapters or make a book to or leave it as it is? This is the question that I really need answered! Be sure to read my first published book EVER!!!