Astral_Soul

Sup man just wanted to let you know that maybe you should upgrade your fanfic a bit I mean your OC was pretty OP but maybe tone down on the powers a bit like give him some strengths and weaknesses then perhaps fix the storyline a bit because to me it seems out of character and everything seemed to be going too fast in certain parts so I suggest on you rewatching the anime's episodes based off your chapters and go on from there anyways your fanfic could use some improvement so I'm here to help in case you need it!