Metalrchairleowo

Hello my name is Adele and I like your story. 
          Sorry if i bother you um you can do reborn as diamond blue from steven universe in another world with system ? 
          If you don't know who is this i can explain. 
          There all information about her. 
          Blue Diamond
          https://steven-universe.fandom.com/wiki/Blue_Diamond
          And Also Additional forms will be at main character. 
          1. Form White Diamond
          https://steven-universe.fandom.com/wiki/White_Diamond
          2. Form Yellow Diamond
          https://steven-universe.fandom.com/wiki/Yellow_Diamond
          3. Form Pink Diamond
          https://steven-universe.fandom.com/wiki/Pink_Diamond
          4. Form Red Diamond
          https://gemcrust.fandom.com/wiki/Red_Diamond
          5. Form Black Diamond
          https://steven-universe-fanbase.fandom.com/wiki/Black_Diamond
          6. Form Rainbow Diamond
          https://the-mars-au.fandom.com/wiki/Rainbow_Diamond
          7. Form Purple Diamond
          https://artifiziell.fandom.com/wiki/Non-KJD_Gemsonas/Purple_Diamond
          8. Form Green Diamond
          https://artifiziell.fandom.com/wiki/Green_Diamond
          9. Form Orange Diamond
          https://gemcrust.fandom.com/wiki/Orange_Diamond
          
          This all forms will be the main character. 
          And the name of the main character is Y/N L/N. 
          

Grimmzshadoe

Hey thanks for the criticism, the reason the Ursa minor was beat up was because the character really can't control himself,  he did heal it after though so....and tge reason that I focused on the gore in the invasion I wanted a slower chapter, this was a pause in the story, it was an artistic choice, because usually my chapters aren't that long, I'm sure you've notice each chapter progressively get longer and longer, and to each their own dude or dudette, alot of people I know loved the invasion part, but fair enough hope you will keep reading, stay safe, peace

Lord_Spark_Starlight

@Grimmzshadoe I'm already caught up with the story
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Grimmzshadoe

@Lord_Spark_Starlight  well there was, the thing with the Ursa was the hint how protective he is, and your opinion matters to me, I want everyone to enjoy my stories and I'm still kind of new to wattpad, so I dont know how to do alot of things yet,  plus I'm on mobile ^ ^ ;  so I hope maybe I can make some changes and you will find it enjoyable,  hopefully again this won't deter you from reading the story and I hope you have a great day, peace
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Lord_Spark_Starlight

@Grimmzshadoe I don't get why you posted on my feed instead of replying on the chapter, but okay. Tbh I don't usually mind gore that much, but it just felt weirdly thrown into the story with no build up. Which broke the flow for me, and as I say some people are into that and I'm not going to judge them for it. It just felt like it needed a bigger build it or some foreshadowing maybe. But again that's just my opinion, and that really doesn't account for much.
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