Ayy dere kiddos ya like JaZz??
But, so, i posted my "first" story. I say "first" because i posted one before this, but i took it down because im a huge coward :/
@Faarbear102 OMG YAAASS i'm so proud of you!!! I read it and I thought it was pretty good but you might want to go back and correct some spelling errors. I also noticed that you didn't really describe the scenes in a lot of detail and it felt like you where just skimming over them which is too bad because this actually sounds quite interesting. Maybe go into detail about the person's whole situation and how they even got to this point in time (idk just some constructive criticism) otherwise I thought it was really thought out and well done.