LorelaiSavage

Apologies I've been crap at replying to comments recently! 
          	
          	I really love chatting to you all and have always tried to respond to every single one I get - time has just been an issue recently so every time I've had a spare moment I've tried to prioritise writing.
          	
          	I appreciate every single one and will absolutely reply to everyone eventually - I've just missed too many notifications for Wattpad to let me catch up! ❤️❤️❤️
          	
          	

LorelaiSavage

Apologies I've been crap at replying to comments recently! 
          
          I really love chatting to you all and have always tried to respond to every single one I get - time has just been an issue recently so every time I've had a spare moment I've tried to prioritise writing.
          
          I appreciate every single one and will absolutely reply to everyone eventually - I've just missed too many notifications for Wattpad to let me catch up! ❤️❤️❤️
          
          

cocox_o

Hey!! 
          I meant to send you a message but think I commented on your story . 
          
          But I LOVE your stories, and think your very talented. and was actually wondering if you could give me sorta like a peer review on one I just started? 
          
          

LorelaiSavage

Are you guys able to see the newest chapter of We Ain't Ashes? It's called 'Shifting Ground'.
          
          I'm getting notifications about comments on it but can't seem to see the published chapter anymore.
          
          Thanks! 

nobookqorms

yepp, it’s there, i can see it
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LorelaiSavage

I'd almost finished drafting the next chapter of We Ain't Ashes.
          
          Today the document is just... gone!
          
          I'm gutted as I'd put a lot of work and hours into it, and I have no idea how it happened - BUT, maybe it's a sign that things weren't meant to go the way I'd planned them.
          
          I'd better get back to starting again. ❤️
          
          

Dani_Ko

That is the worst feeling! I’m sorry that happened to your work. It will be twice as good next time around. ❤️ 
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Arwen_Night

@LorelaiSavage what did you have planned? 
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mrsmikaelson0000

@ LorelaiSavage  and it will be perfect like always 
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Googieshmuckums

I was thinking about how TWD has some of the best character development of any TV show, and I started picking that apart. With Daryl, I’ve always wondered how much of an impact Merle’s death actually had on his development.When Merle dies, we get that little time jump and suddenly Daryl feels way more open. He’s making jokes, laughing more, and building stronger connections with the group, eventually accepting them as his family. Daryl always used isolation as a coping mechanism and I feel like a lot of that came from Merle. As much as he loved him as a brother a lot of trauma came with that relationship. I wonder if finally letting Merle go is what made Daryl stop seeing himself as an outsider who was always ready to leave if the chance came up to becoming one of the biggest pillars of his new found family. I also love that even before Merle’s death we got little glimpses of the real Daryl throughout the show. Like how hard he searched for Sophia, how he apologized to the prisoners who lost their friends, and how he was the first one to run off and get Judith food.

LorelaiSavage

@Googieshmuckums I agree with all of this ❤️
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Googieshmuckums

Sorry for the random long post. I’m reading Ashes and I’m at the part where Merle’s back and it got me thinking 
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LorelaiSavage

And that's on posting at 3am...
          
          I was so eager to get the latest chapter of We Ain't Ashes published last night, that I managed to post it with some of my notes still on it. 
          
          I bet some of you were confused as hell, but hopefully you also enjoyed accidentally seeing a bit of my writing process. 
          
          I think I've removed them now but this girl is tired as hell so who knows? 
          
          ❤️❤️❤️

PanicMuch

not complaining here. Nice surprise to wake up to 
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