Beautiful_Diaster93

Hey! My name is Kyh and I was wondering if you could read my story P.S. I Hate you. I would really appreciate it. If you like it, vote, comment, become a fan, spread the word! If not, thank you for taking the time out of your day to read this. Here's a preview of the first chapter:
          
          Chapter One
          
          Nick
          The sun beamed down on me as it rose this morning. Last night's events flashed through my head, as I became more awake. The way he touched me, caressed me, held me; last night was amazing. The body next to me shifted and rolled over. I turned over and looked at his handsome sleeping face. Strongly defined chin, eyes the color of deep blue, wavy dark brown hair, perfectly pouty lips. This guy was every girls dream, but he isn't mine. Besides his charming good looks, he was and complete and utter asshole. He was inconsiderate, arrogant, cocky, condescending, everything you wouldn't want in a guy, yet every chick wants him! I don't get it. And yet he's lying right next to me. He's my enemy, and I just lost my virginity to him. 
          
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          Two days earlier
          
          I was in AP Biology with my best friend, Jamie. He's been my best friend since we were in diapers. Jamie stood 6'2', athlete's body, square chin, eyes the shade of jade green, the lips of an Greek God. Yep, my best friends hot, but he was so much more to me. He was my big brother, my protector, my hard rock. All the girls have been wanting him since high school started, but he's had his eye on somebody else. That somebody would be my older sister/twin Samone. He's been in love with her for years, but she's never know his true feelings, because he has never gotten the courage to tell her. And every time he does, it always finds a way to backfire. Jamie's also the McGinley High's star quarterback. 

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Hey, 
          
          I was wondering if you have the time could you check out my stories 
          
          Wish came true...unfortunately. I have up an intro and the first 13 chapters 
          
          I Love You More Each Time You Hit Me. I just started it and have up an intro and the first 2 chapters. 
          
          It would mean a lot to me if you could check them out and tell me what you think. I understand if you don't have the time to read them.
          
          Thanks for your time, 
          ~Jenny :)