LorittaNilMosweu

Hie! I am a new writer but i think I am pretty good at this so give me a try and i am open to constructive criticism. I await you feedback
          	I just published "Chapter 3" of my story "The mafia's fiancee". https://www.wattpad.com/1309264888?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=LorittaNilMosweu&wp_originator=76cUdsPHNElRzGVl5bAbcRaagt%2BKiMiY5LMTmY%2BE9LXOa%2F7xC9XngiUDsUuKVAhKQiSAvOq1hKybaE4cVpYOJyaJZCMVB2fe68%2FRf9ji8gurKfmZdHVkkfc1WxqDiI5k