Loryn Eagleson

I'm alright, very hyper/happy at the moment!  lol

hi-ya! how are you doing?

Advice on editing Blind Not deaf?

Thank you for your honesty. I did rush through the ending and I apologize to my readers.  Im honna go back and re.edit the WHOLE thing. I believe the details will be totally diffrent. Im kicking myself on how i messed up the first book. hat's why I'm working harder on my new book Dear Shirley. Thanks again ill look into it!.  :-)

Hi Loryn, I just finished reading 'Blind not Deaf'. I enjoyed the story but have a few little comments. More drama is not always better. The girl who was pretending to be a nurse - that bit confused me and seemed to be irrelevant to the storyline. The end of the story (after she wakes up) seems hop-scotch. It jumps around too much and seems disjointed. I think it would have been better if this story was written totally in one POV. Again - I enjoyed the story and hope you'll write many more. You have a great style that reads easy.

Hey! Just wanted to say thanks for your kind words. (: ..I know I'm a little late sorry about that. I really did appreciate your words and I hope you continue to enjoy my story. (:

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was it "They Gave Me this Life...."? im trying to update them all soon