LostBoy_OfNeverland

"Its a wattpad book" is a crap excuse to use to not even expect a good story.  Miss me with that bull and please STOP replying it to my comments yall. If the story doesn't make sense,  the author needs to make it make sense -- not do it how i want, that's not what im saying.  I'm saying if 90% of the comments are confused and the story jumps from a to l and doesn't explain anything ever,  then it's not a good story and it needs work.  Period.

LostBoy_OfNeverland

"Its a wattpad book" is a crap excuse to use to not even expect a good story.  Miss me with that bull and please STOP replying it to my comments yall. If the story doesn't make sense,  the author needs to make it make sense -- not do it how i want, that's not what im saying.  I'm saying if 90% of the comments are confused and the story jumps from a to l and doesn't explain anything ever,  then it's not a good story and it needs work.  Period.

LostBoy_OfNeverland

"If you see a penny, you pick it up and maybe all day long you'll have good luck. But if it faces down you turn it around. Up is good and good is heads, tails is so bad you'll wish you were dead ...... " 
          
          
          And this is the full rhyme as creepy as it gets  but with plenty of instruction 

academybrat

Thank you for adding my story. Other than it’s not finished. How did you feel about it? 

LostBoy_OfNeverland

@academybrat lol nothing wrong with writing your story your way. If someone doesnt like it, they wont read further. If they like it, they will. As long as you enjoy the story its all good
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academybrat

thank you. tell you a secret i thought so too, but figured hey it’s fan fiction let’s have fun with it. i just let my imagination run wild. 
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LostBoy_OfNeverland

@academybrat Its not for me. I didnt make it very far in but what I did read was just too extra. She ran from them and immediately somehow got arrested and found this new family (even though canonically sang had extreme social avoidant disorder and was super uncomfortable with females). Theres the cliche of this found brother who threatens the Blackbourne team for no reason. Theres the jumping around at the hospital where she manages to pop up to say one thing and then oops gotta run. Im not saying its a bad story; there were plenty of comments from people who liked it i think. It just wasnt an enjoyable read for me personally.
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LostBoy_OfNeverland

I miss the days when people had a little pride in what they posted. They would proofread -- weed out all the little spelling and grammar mistakes and even the plot errors-- and when they posted the story, it would be WHEN they said they would post it. And there wasnt any of this "im bored so i stopped writing it" or "its my story so i dont care if anybody likes what theyre reading or not". Not because they bowed to public opinion, not at all.  Because they had a story to tell and they freaking told it to the best of their abilities. Writers nowadays -- not all, of course, but an unfortunate amount-- are just full of crap. But luckily for them, the readers' attention spans these days are so short that they couldnt care less if theyre reading a good story. As long as they get the smut and the over the top drama in as few sentences as possible, these readers are happy. But im getting off my soapbox-- ive no intention of trying to fix anything. Wattpad lowered its standards years ago -- readers and authors alike -- but so did Amazon, Goodreads, heck even B&N doesnt care as long as they can make a profit. Read what you want, im not saying not to. I just miss those days is allb

LostBoy_OfNeverland

Authors on wattpad kill me! How is it that as soon as somebody doesn't like your story, or has a genuine reason to dislike your character or the tone or the format etc., you automatically jump to "you're discriminating" or "you just hate LGBTQ" like seriously fvck off with that. You don't know if I'm gay or bi or straight or white or black or Asian or female or male. Ffs what I put on my profile could be 99% lies. Get over yourself. If I comment that somethings wrong, it's cause somethings wrong. Maybe-- just maybe-- your story is trash and you really just aren't very good at writing a story people want to read.

LostBoy_OfNeverland

Wattpad is so freaking annoying. Why are all the authors writing about these Korean characters right now? It doesn't matter what category I pick -- werewolf, fanfiction, vampire, lgbtq, it doesn't matter !! -- all the stories that come come have these Korean characters  taehyung or chanueol or whatever. And I'm not racist, honest. I just don't know what band or book or TV show or whatever they even come from so I'm. Just. Not. Interested. In. Them. So why can't I find a single story using the search feature that doesn't have them? Sorry, I American,  I'd like to read stories about Americans sometimes

Ekiyairadiran

@LostBoy_OfNeverland 
            I am a new writer . I don't write about any korean characters . I think my stories are raw and more real life. I try to connect BL to real life . If you are interested then please review my story .
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