LouBellz's conversations

LouBellz

Nov 13, 2012 09:29AM

hmmm some people may not think that grammer and spelling is important but it does make a huge difference to the flow of the story, especially if it's good and this one is.  Another note - any A/N should be restricted to just before or after (not both and not in the body of the copy).
          	
          	Really enjoy the story - a bit of explanation would be nice on how Ferra got to have red hair and freckles (one could hazard a guess) It would make for an interesting chapter.

Tragic

Nov 14, 2012

I you could read my story I'll read yours. Mine is called The Vampire on Campus.

LouBellz

Nov 13, 2012

hmmm some people may not think that grammer and spelling is important but it does make a huge difference to the flow of the story, especially if it's good and this one is.  Another note - any A/N should be restricted to just before or after (not both and not in the body of the copy).
          
          Really enjoy the story - a bit of explanation would be nice on how Ferra got to have red hair and freckles (one could hazard a guess) It would make for an interesting chapter.