@ xcoffeeandbooksx Hey thank you so much for your advice! I certainly was impressed by her style of writing- such a good manner of words! I liked her plot very much indeef, there is one thing i might critizes... She is gotten so much into detail. There is a possibilty that a wattpad reader isn't expecting such so they might loose their interest. Maybe she could focus more in the main story, intruduce more relevant persons or include already some intruigent words to catch the leaders interest and to built up tension so -together with her great style of language- the story may be more intense. I really liked her Cover and introduction, now she perhaps could evolve her story. Great work from her, i look forward to read more!!!
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