LouineSams

"Perhaps the mission of those who love mankind is to make people laugh at the truth, to make truth laugh, because the only truth lies in learning to free ourselves from insane passion for the truth." - Umberto Eco, The Name of the Rose
          	
          	May you rest in peace, Signore.

ShelleyBurbank

Hi Louine! I love your profile pic...makes me smile. Thanks for adding my story to your reading list. I hope you like it.

LouineSams

@ShelleyBurbank Hi, Shelley! Haha thank you! I am looking forward to reading it. :)
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mama_90

thank you for following me

mama_90

I am later on going to go on with more details in the book with both backgrounds and Thank you
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LouineSams

@mama_90 Thanks for the follow also! I briefly read the chapter you have on "Him" - looks good for the story line. However, it seemed like it's going too fast; you covered so much on just a very short chapter. I don't know what your other plans are for the future but I do suggest expanding the story behind the bet, or her relationship with Andrew, or doing a more in depth background on Jessica. This will make your chapter longer and will give your readers a "feel" for your characters, and evoke empathy for what she's going through. Hope that helps! Good luck on your book. : )
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