cocoandbells
Hey, sorry for bothering you on your dm but I recently published a book and I’m trying to get more people to read it. I’d really appreciate it if you checked it out and told me what you think. Be honest too. If something’s good, bad, confusing, annoying, whatever, I just want genuine feedback.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409532691?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=cocoarolls_
Love2Write4eves
@cocoandbells I read your first chapter. It's actually really good. The story itself is great. There's some simple errors if you want hard critic lol for gammer- but nothing confusing at all, I don't really care about it but if you want the most blunt honesty, its about the only critique to give- everything else is perfect so far!! I'm happy to keep reading as you update. It looks like it'll be a good story!!
