LoveAngel16

I hope you like my story I worked very heard on it plz. Comment on it I would like to know want you think.

Freakx3

Hello! ^.^
          I hope you can help me >.<
          You see, I entered The Watty Awards, and I'm hoping you'd give my story a read, a comment or a vote maybe >_<
          It's called:
          Being a bodyguard of a hollywood jerk! 
          Here's what it's about (as if the title wasn't obvious enough >.<) 
          
          When you get assigned to be the bodyguard of one of the hottest, new moviestars in Hollywood, you would think any girl would scream in excitement, but not Cera Joyce. She sees right through his glamorous facade to the gets-all-he-wants whiny brat he really is. The journey Cera Joyce is about to embark on won't be easy, especially with Richard's spoiled demands, obnoxious attitude, and cocky demeanor hindering her ability to perform her job, but she faces every obstacle head on, regardless of the hoops she must jump through. Somewhere along the way though, Cera Joyce will realize things are not always what they appear to be and will have to face her biggest challenge yet! 
          
          And don't worry, it's nothing predictable. I'm trying to make it interesting to read, so it's not one of those "I-hate-him-but-he-is-so-hot-I-want-to-fuck-him-bad" 
          There are way too many stories like that on here...
          
          Well I've taken up enough of your time!
          Hope to hear from you ^-^
          
          I'll apriciate all feedback and comments :] 
          
          ~Purplemiley0