Alaska

I think my biggest flaw in my writing is that I try to tie up all the loose ends which makes the ending seem forced. I need to learn to let a few loose ends stay to enhance my writing and leave some things open to the readers.

Everyone do me a favor and read this! Definitely means without a doubt. Defiantly mean resistance or bold disobedience. Example)
          "are you ready to go?" she asked with a small annoyed sigh. 
          James nodded, "Defiantly." 
          
          Please fix this in your stories! 
          Thanks!

Tell me how this works. part 2 of one of my stories has 5 reads, but part 4 has 10 reads. Those 5 extras must be very lost...