Lovely4242

Also I just have a question, do you guys think that I have too many POV switches? I personally like it as I think it adds more to the story but I heard somewhere that it makes the writing look sloppy. Are you guys sometimes annoyed by it? 

Lovely4242

@wriiiter omg thanks! and noted! :) 
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wriiiter

@Lovely4242 nah, your p.o.v switches are fine. i like 'em a lot because like you said, it adds more to the story :> keep going, your story is amazing :)))
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Lovely4242

Also I just have a question, do you guys think that I have too many POV switches? I personally like it as I think it adds more to the story but I heard somewhere that it makes the writing look sloppy. Are you guys sometimes annoyed by it? 

Lovely4242

@wriiiter omg thanks! and noted! :) 
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wriiiter

@Lovely4242 nah, your p.o.v switches are fine. i like 'em a lot because like you said, it adds more to the story :> keep going, your story is amazing :)))
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Lovely4242

So I started writing the next chapter of “Hero Rivals Are Strange” and...I don’t think you guys are ready for it...I’m doing something that I never done before (not lemon). It’s gonna be another long chapter and I hope to get it out soon!! 

Lovely4242

Chapter 37 of Hero Rivals are strange is out!!! Biggest chapter yet!!! 

snowwyriah

@Lovely4242 You’re my savior for 2020
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Lovely4242

Not sure if anyone cares, but I’m working on the new chapter of Hero Rivals Are Strange. I’m about half way done! hope you guys are excited as it was so much fun to write and hopefully brings a smile to your face in these challenges times. (It’s going to be a HUGE chapter) 

snowwyriah

@MILKBEFORECEREALS exactly it's something I always look forward too
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Lovely4242

Omg thank you so much!!! 
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MILKBEFORECEREALS

@Lovely4242 YASSSSSSSS your story is so fricking GOOD
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Lovely4242

I started writing the next chapter of "Hero Rivals Are Strange" and I want to do a cute thing where you put simple music at the top of the story so while people read they have something to listen to. Does anyone know a really happy, upbeat, finger snapping music I could put?