Jade Beetle

Hy sorry to disturbe you but please check my book once u won't be disppointed https://www.wattpad.com/story/385910630?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Moonwrts_

Hey LovelyBeatle I loved your story that you posted it just needs character confirmation and their feelings a bit more but thank you for following me I appreciate it love you and your support. 
          
          XOXO 
          
          L O V E I S L A N D L E X I

Hey ....

Hey I read your story and I find it really interesting and your work was simple but great.
          Looking forward to the story.....

Hii I have opened my review shop, visit once if you're interested. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385916242?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Krystal_ima

dear jade beetle, 
          thank you so much for commenting on my story, i’m glad you like it! 
          your story is short and sweet, but at some points i wished you had written it with more depth to the characters, their backstories, thoughts, and feelings. keep working on your writing. your english is really good and everything else comes with practice :)
          best, b&ws

Hey I read your story and it was simple and I loved the idea behind the story ...
          If you want to engage your readers more try giving insist in to the minds of the characters, what they wish and what they think and also add some more meaningful and emotional dialogues it will help the readers feel close to the characters and help them connect and root for the characters more...
          ❤ 
          You have the potential to be a very good writer please keep on writing more your story was soo sweet 

Hii thank you so much for viewing my book!! I loved yours :) 

hello there,
          thank you so much for the kind words you left about my book, it means a lot and i hope you continue to read! your book is wonderful as well ❤️

Hello Friend...thanks so much for reading my first published work and for your comment and vote. I read your story. It's a sad story but a nice one! Many anticipated that they will be together again someday But at least, the memories they shared together, though temporary, was engraved forever in their hearts