No problem! I was in the middle of reading another book, so I just read A Runaway today. I am intrigued by the story so far and interested in how it will unfurl.
I hate to be a grammar nazi, but I must say, I found many editing errors while I was reading. This was including when the chapter said "edited". If you would like, I wouldn't mind editing for you in the least. I cannot promise to catch all of the errors, but I will remedy 95% of them if you wish.
The only problem I have with your story so far is that there isn't more of it! It seems to be a great read, and I love Elliot's personality. Her view of the world is also very relatable, because most people experience a time in their lives when they feel that way.
Looking forward to more of your story,
-KrisC
