Lovexx2000

Μια μικρή ιστορία που έγραψα πριν αρκετό καιρό για τον Αγίο Βαλεντίνο. https://www.wattpad.com/story/135642692

BlueberryBooks

Hey :) you asked me for my opinion about your story a couple of days ago, so here it comes: I really like your story, it's a good idea and I think you're a good writer, the only problems are some writing mistakes and the shortness of the boys' POVs, I sometimes just don't understand their meaning..  I'm gonna keep reading and hope what I said was at least a little bit useful..  :D

Lovexx2000

@BlueberryBooks thanks for your opinion, I'll try to be better <3 <3 I'm glad you liked my story tho :)
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