Loving_thy_selfie

Hey everyone I'm still writing my story I hope you guys would read and respond so if there's any you suggestions or comments please post them and I will try to work them into the story.

ilissa

Thanks for the follow! Please read my story "Him" and tell me what you think please?! Thanks again

ilissa

@BeautifulRadiance I will thanks
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Loving_thy_selfie

@ilissa i will, i kinda in the middle of anouther story but i definately will! I read the first chapter and it was actually really intresting! if u want u could read some of mine :)
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JamaiaMonet

Can You Please Update West Side Symbol and you could have the dude try and make a plan to get his girl out while they are torturing her  and then he comes and saves her then they have a beautiful relationship then you could give some of the rest of your characters that you already have in the book some life and then bring back some more drama in the beautiful couple's life and if you can, can you put some sexual content in the story just to make it pop? 
          
          ~Thank You