@DearAgony you're welcome, the girl in the mirror's great though b/c it's kinda based on cinderella the first parts were a little predictable. the bit with the mom's getting confusing, she loves her mom and won't hear a word against her but at the same time her mom's calling her a murderess and eloise is scared of her? what's with that? hmm, i need to read back and see if you say how her mom died...does she actually kill her mom or is she just having random nightmares? it's really good, you pull off all the scenes perfectly, which is great b/c a lot of people can only really pull off certain types of scenes.