Lt-ColViper

Next chapter will be the longest chapter I’ve done. So far its 5,000 words. Not even halfway done.

AshenHound115

@Lt-ColViper i was wondering if i could get some feedback on my story would you be able to provide some i'd really appreciate it
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SilauZaitro

what happened?

SilauZaitro

@ Lt-ColViper  ah lol. . Okay. Have forgotten this XD. Good to see you alive✌
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Lt-ColViper

Next chapter will be the longest chapter I’ve done. So far its 5,000 words. Not even halfway done.

AshenHound115

@Lt-ColViper i was wondering if i could get some feedback on my story would you be able to provide some i'd really appreciate it
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Lt-ColViper

would you guys like this one to keep going or do you want a new fresh story? thoughts?

Capt_Contractor

Fine either way. If you’re bored, feel free to start a new story. Don’t stay invested if you don’t want to. 
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