@LtPringles
I'd like to apologize for not updating my story for the past few months. Senior high has kicked into high gear, and I've been stressing/procrastinating with all the stuff I've been doing. Nevertheless, I have no intention of putting ADTF on hiatus or for adoption.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask them.
Is the smut I've been writing recently in my chapters unnecessary?
I think that's still extremely far off, in the story but I definitely have given it some thought.
Anyway, most likely, I'll have the UTF and the IPC fight it out in whatever corporate struggles, proxy conflicts, and trade wars I might think up as Hoyo continues to flesh out HSR, but that's still very, very far into the future considering HSR isn't a priority rn.
@LtPringles Hey Mr Pringles when will you make the SATO meet with the IPC? Basically if SATO is expanding after the Martian war then will you make a crossover with Honkai StarRail with various factions within HSR reacts to it?
Quick question is the Halo universe still in the same Galaxy as SATO if so will they also have access to slipspace and forerunner technology?
@volandria17 Like I said, multiversal shenanigans, perhaps a Rift or something I'll think to explain how their realities are crossing over
When will you get to the Halo universe?
@volandria17 Pre-rewrite, I had planned to crossover into Halo far late into the story, and I plan to do the same as I flesh out and improve what has already been crossed over, to try and make it less cringy and rushed, which you may observe given the extreme lengths and ungodly length of each chapter so far, attributing to my slow updates.
Also before I forget Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
I just want to make sure about something regarding the rewrite version of your story here mainly the new chapter that was just posted. By any chance is the Falmart continent where the Saderan empire is based now in the Pacific Ocean on Planet Earth or something because that was the case in your original version of the story but I don’t quite see any sign of that in the rewrite version?
Alright then take your time with rewriting the chapters you need. Also if you would like to include more crossovers into your story after all your rewriting for the chapters is all done you can look into the message I posted a month earlier on November 24, 2023 regarding the suggestions of what crossovers to include into your story much later.
@Explor0 I haven't really thought it through that far yet. Seeing as I have to reintegrate a lot of the crossovers into the story, and improve upon my shitty pacing and cringy detail and dialogue, the rewrite comes first and foremost. I want it so that the rewrite makes every crossover feel more significant and not just some additional side arc for the Federation's main story. There will always be a difference between the original elements I create for my story, and what media I crossover.
That’s understandable since VIRM is a dangerous threat that will need to be dealt with and destroyed. One thing I’m kinda curious about once you are done rewriting all the chapters you need to what are your plans for the future chapters that will come after your rewrite version for the story is finished?
Hi I’m not sure if you plan on including anymore worlds for crossovers or not but if you still plan on doing so I think I have some suggestions. These suggestions would include anime worlds of Eminence in Shadow, In another world with my smartphone, and Re:zero and the worlds of the Walking Dead, the Last of Us and Dying Light. For the worlds of the Walking Dead and the Last of Us it would be sometime before the outbreak begins when they appear at least a year before the outbreak begins and spreads globally and for Dying Light it would be during the events of the first game. There is also the video game world of Fallout but when it appears it would probably be during the time of the resource wars and it would be a year before the nuclear war began. I’ll leave it up to you if you would like to include these worlds in your story or not since I did notice you made a sort of short chapter of Japan from the anime world of Highschool of the Dead appearing in the capital world of the United Terran Federation. If you haven’t heard of any of them you can look them up on the internet.
You could've made a version 2 of the story a different type of front like a new book. Got to confused which chapters you've rewritten since none of the chapters hage any label on them suggesting their version of the iteration.
Just kinda suggesting. Just make a new book and call it version 2 or whatever
My old chapter drafts will be published soon. These chapters were written about a year ago, and a few months before the rewrite announcement. Some may be incomplete, and some may be cringy.
It'll mean a lot of work for me on ADTF, and cost me time which I may not have for the rewrite. But I hope you will forgive me for my shitty update schedule, and for my old, cringy writing.
I understand the scale and sheer disparity of 40K with the current UN/UTF, which is what I'm trying to address with the rewrite, and future plans for the story. If you've read the latest chapters of the rewrite so far, I think Terra still has a long ways to go before I can scale it up to things like Star Wars and Warhammer.
To answer your question though, I do plan on crossing over into Warhammer, but that will likely be extremely far away given my focus on the rewrite, and the reintegration of current media that has already been crossed over.
@LtPringles Is the 40k galaxy abit too much for the UN (If you read the lore or watched luetin09 videos) in terms of how to take care of tyranids, chaos, eldar, tau, necrons and etc Because when dealing with 40k Its story setting (Taking place in a galaxy) LITERALLY DEMANDS Massive feats of attrition Basically can the UN handle all of the imperium worlds in terms of sheer capacity to take care Trillions if not over 10 Quintillion humans?
@LtPringles Hey Mr pringles with the UN can handle the 40K galaxy in sheer terms of how the other factions have turned their own galaxy into a shitshow? (This is a question about adding 40k in your story)
I'm sorry. I'm still alive, and I apologize if ADTF has been on hiatus for so long. I'm currently still working on a rewritten chapter, and if some of you remember, it was the one-shot crossover with the UNSA happening upon the world of Avatar.
But with my senior high year about to start soon, I don't even know if I'll be able to finish it this month.
I hope you guys can understand.
