LuSuah

Chapter 1 starts with a countdown, I wanted to give the illusion of a person going into a hypnosis. 
          	
          	Sort of like those scenes where therapists would use hypnosis for their patients to confront trauma and memories, Neera is pulled into these spells at night. ‍
          	
          	Is this what you thought of? If not, what did the countdown remind you of?

LuSuah

Chapter 1 starts with a countdown, I wanted to give the illusion of a person going into a hypnosis. 
          
          Sort of like those scenes where therapists would use hypnosis for their patients to confront trauma and memories, Neera is pulled into these spells at night. ‍
          
          Is this what you thought of? If not, what did the countdown remind you of?

LuSuah

What did you think of the first chapter of “Dark Ronin”? Was it interesting? 
          
          What do you think could’ve been better? 
          
          Read Chapter 1 of “Dark Ronin” here! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/313258917?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_writer&wp_uname=LuSuah&wp_originator=isyRSJNxmP8gj44kzPbS%2FhwGB7qbAgJVc6ogpAx4WZUp2daxYt3hjo0OS0n4AM1%2B%2BBQsqjIxIw4%2BJGbxLfLSo1RZ2ixkrfgheBeg5aXSJLW8bL3JIJYleiUAh8vJY2L%2F