LucasRaphael

@avalon-love pas du tout haha, je suis en couple avec une fille qui ne lui ressemble pas du tout :D

DerreckSanchez

Um just noticed you reading A Bisexual Story. Sorry but uh, the grammar in there is AWFUL. I didn't edit at all. Just warning you and letting you know that story is not recommended. This one I would https://www.wattpad.com/story/83758077-shadow-wood There will still be a few grammar mistakes but nothing compared to the one you've been currently reading. I will also forewarn you, the first 4 chapters are slow but it does pick up, and it does get a lot better. 
          
          P.S. Yes Dee Jordan is my pen name.

DerreckSanchez

@LucasRaphael Oh man... well, ok. Until then, my eyes are bleeding for you. That story is strictly the first and only draft. Not to mention this was one of my first stories ever published on here. 
            
            Also, I don't think there is anything wrong with your English.
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LucasRaphael

Haha, sorry but I am already fully into A Bisexual Story, will explain you why once I am done with it in my ending comment. And don't worry about grammar, I am French after all so I don't get everything said as a perfect English speaking person would haha 
            
            But I will very probably keep reading your stories so I may read it next :)
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x_IMOTEP_x

Tu as vraiment l'air d'être quelqu'un d'intéressant, d'autant plus que t'es histoires sont vraiment top. Je n'ai pu lire que 'Naked Soul' et le debut de 'Broken Childhood' , mais je suis vraiment intriguée par ton style d'écriture :)
          
          Voilà voilà, je voulais juste dire un truc ^^