LuckxZz

Don't forget to also read my Hazbin Hotel fanfic

Hi , I want to recommend 2 short stories invented by MHA fans. One in the form of a comic book (https://mangapark.org/comic/99244/boku-no-hero-academia-true-hero-doujinshi ) 6 chapters each, as well as videos (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=85MkVs1zZJc&list=PLLmtAYJYwWSgywVelB7ESM8TMDiNFEzPo ) also 6 chapters each. I thought if you look at them, you'll find something interesting for yourself.

Hi, I want to offer you an idea about MHA and the symbiont.
          https://i.pinimg.com/originals/79/4d/ff/794dff2659d51f5ea7a5b678c6c8e510.jpg . 
          And another short but interesting story about the symbiont as an example.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/246044411-let-there-be-carnage .
          I thought they would be useful in your story or perhaps inspire you to create a new one (I would be glad to see a story about Carnage).
           I still have some left. 
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/d2/12/f5/d212f5542b39d94b0893841694be9472.jpg
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/a7/38/0e/a7380ecdfb45c666d3ae9a8ff0303ed2.jpg
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/86/81/4e/86814e8c3fceede4084fba2405c4a257.jpg
          
          https://i.pinimg.com/736x/84/c5/e3/84c5e3f74f104d79ed46a10c0b3399fa.jpg
          
          Himiko Toga was one of the most well-developed anime characters. But because of her quirk, her parents began to suppress her (mostly because they were afraid of what the public would say about them), and Toga herself suffered from holding back and being afraid that everyone would hate her. She cannot be cured because she is not sick, and therefore the question arises, "is there a place in the world for such an unusual person?" And then, bam, a bloodthirsty symbiote appears from outer space, which quenches her thirst and becomes a friend with whom she can be honest. During the day she is an ordinary schoolgirl, but at night she is a real monster who preys on people he likes. The heroes will hunt the red villain, the villains will think that it is possible to "NOMU", and ordinary people will be afraid of the elusive killer who roams the city at night. Toga in anime has always been famous for her elusiveness, and therefore it will be very difficult to catch her (besides, everyone will be looking for a red monster, not a teenage girl, and Carnage can talk to himself, and anyone who has seen him may have the feeling that he has a split personality). And maybe they would have the ability to copy the power of the people whose heads they ate.

Hello! Good morning (evening/night), sorry for the delay, it's just that i'm doing 4 chapters And planning on starting a new fic, do you guys have an Idea of which anime i should do?

Hello everynyan, i'm going to delay a little bit the chapter 7, but tomorrow it's going to be posted, so, have a good day!

Hello Author! I just want to give you some critique about the current state of the story 'Reincarnated In MHA as A Quirk', because I find the concept really interesting but the execution could use more work.
          
          While the formatting isn't my favourite type, it does remind me of what you would typically see from Chinese web novels, so it's fine if that's the type of format you're aiming for!
          
          I do however, think you should stick to only 1 POV instead of alternating between different people, or at least reserve the change in POV in a separate chapter if it's necessary. 
          
          Chapter 0 was alright because as a reader I understood that it's the MC that I'm following along, however in Chapters 1 the constant change in POV confuses me on whose eyes I'm supposed to be looking out of. (I think this is a common thing that new writers do especially if it's their first time writing fanfiction)
          
          Despite the labeling, I find my eyes tend to gloss over the (insert person's) POV as it's not a normal occurrence in writing to have a change in POV in 1 chapter (let alone multiple in a row)
          
          Also, regarding the 'system', I didn't think it was ever explained what it was nor did we ever get the explanation on how the MC discovers and reacts to its existence. 
          
          There are other critiques that I would give but I think these two are the main concerns I have for the fic.
          
          Anyways, sorry for the long rant! Bad formatting can be a huge factor as to why someone decides not to read something, but I'd love to see more of how the story unfolds!