LucyBourne26

i love that idea! thankyou so much! i'll start writing very soon:D xx

SneakyKitty

tht could be ur first chapter, but there has to come a twist in the story
          like maybe theres someone thts a freak and hes following her, and he sends her freaky emails or texts or letters, and its all abt her boyfriend protecting her and stuff
          u no?

SneakyKitty

well at the time of the party, u could make it tht she enters, lost in the crowd
          then as shes wandering upstairs, she finds his room and enters. once she enters, she realizes theres someone in there, turning out to be him. they chit chat a bit, before he brings up he fact that he wants to talk, confessing tht he was crzy abt her, and noing tht a girl like him wud never go for a guy like him, he was scared she'd dump him or something. then as maybe she like starts babling, he kisses her, and the make out
          

LucyBourne26

I'm taking forever, so sorry!
          But I've had to focus on my career as a musician for the past few weeks, crazy audition that I wasn't expecting to get through and did:L so I'm so sorry but my story is going to have to take the back seat for a little while as it's hectic right now!!! Thankyou so much for your lovely comments and being so patient! Xxxxxx