Aria

because you cant hear what im hearing
          you cant see what im seeing
          you not having the dreams
          you dont know anything
          right. um. thank you for letting me know.

ughghghghghghghghghghghhhhhh im in such a problem rn i really wanna write but i cant be asked ngl

Cries

check horse race rq
          check comments

Happy new year yall! Let’s hope I don’t procrastinate as much 

I love how no matter what I write there’s always a spelling error or some shit I need to pay attention in English classes more 

Updates I made in the rewrite so far:
          
          PERSONALITY FIXES:
          Geo more bubbly and closer to bread In the first few chapters, showing their friendship.
          Yet more calm and responsible, sort of holding the group together.
          Aria more rude and impatient.
          Bread quite tired and not really caring.
          Showed Serena and Kayleigh’s friendship a bit more.
          Gave Godz, Train, Maruu and Ash a few more lines in the early chapters.
          Overall made people’s lines fit them better.
          
          NEW WRITING STYLE:
          
          I made it so that it looked less like dialogue.
          
          EXTRAS:
          
          Almost everyone was better introduced in chapter 2, except Maruu and Ash who were in chapter 3
          
          Chapter 3 is now slightly longer.
          
          I now have to rewrite chapters 4, 5, 6 and 7 which won’t take longer then around 3 days. After that, chapter 8 will be at and I have quite a good storyline for the rest of the book!
          
          I can’t wait to continue, and thank you for all the support in these last 2 months.
          
          Hope you enjoy reading, and merry Christmas!

Changed some lines and stuff in previous chapters so that it fit the characters personality .

WE’RE SO BACK BAES

Ya gurl has come to a conclusion - I will be writing another trials series with characters I made - but on this account. The series im currently writing will be on the main account.