Luluvicrawr
Ur what the world needs a good writer but I suggjest u connect a bit more with the readers I mean I know it's a fiction story and all (unless it's not ^,^) but not everyone goes running away after seein that their pregnant and try to change ur stories up a bit more (the have a bit too much I common to all the other ones but overall great job and hope u get more votes ,fans ect. God bless :)
