Reggie_miller4343

Hi,
          First of all, how are you? Writing is a beautiful way to convey your emotions to people, and you are a very decent and vibe-filled writer in this writing community. I analyzed your story, and it was really good. From what I felt, you seem to be a very experienced writer. How many years have you been writing?

Rei_Derial

Hey, you're a great author. Although I could see little bits of stuff that could be fixed or improved in your rewrite of the story, but otherwise you're a good writer. I'm enviable how you can write such long chapters. Keep up the good work! I know it's weird saying this like... you know what I mean. It makes it seem like this is just a sarcastic remark, but I promise that it's not.

Rei_Derial

@NotSteve2 Ooh, I see. Quite interesting... If only I can just not be procrastinating a lot and have writer's block, I can remake a book of mine that is clearly a disappointment for me.
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Luminaire2nd

@Rei_Derial The predecessor is quite an embarrassment to be honest. I couldn't really handle it at all. It was a good experience though. That's why there's a six months hiatus in the previous one . It's for  me to learn from another people.
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Rei_Derial

@NotSteve2 Well, now that I discovered your re-write(I haven't read the predecessor yet), I might not want to let it go because I quite like it. Anyway, no matter how long(unless it's over a year or two) it takes for you to publish a new chapter, I'll wait. Just take your time.
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