PGEchic

Hey Luna!!!! 
          Before I tell you about my awesome stories just thought I'd let you know that you love my top 4 colors. Except in mine Silver's first, then blue, then black, then purple.
          
          I have three stories that I would love for you to read and tell me what you thought. The first is a short story about the tragic life of twins Annie and Andie. Can they fix all the wrong in the world, when they have no one but themselves? (If I Could Go Back In Time) The second is about the teenage rivalry between to girls who used to be friend. It's been three years since the problem can they fix their relationship or are they too far gone. It's written in two different POVs one on my page and another at www.wattpad.com/user/momokitty. (Top Hotties ~A GwG Novel~) The last is about an amatuer model who thinks the love of her life maybe Mace Maxwell, another model, but when she meets him she finds that somethings should just stay apart of her fantasy world. But now she's stranded on an island with him as her only companion until a blue eyed stranger sweeps her off her feet. Can Mace win her heart? Will they escape the island? Why is the blue eyed stranger the only inhabatant on the island? Is he dangerous? (Jungle Fever)

Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if y o u could read one of my sto ri es and comment on it! (voti ng , f anning, and whatever ar e a ll o ptional, its the revi ews I nee d!) I'd love to retu rn the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything i s greatly appreciated! Thanks f o r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was j u st your typical Hawaii tra ns pl ant to Manhattan, obsess ive to p student who actually pro cras tinates everything, and b ound of Ivy; future care erist and c urrent fortune tel ler. U ntil-- that is--she fin ds out everyth ing she aced is more o r less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and strivin g socialit e--and hell o demons layer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--t hat is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome t o a world where elves,well, a re n 't your fairy tale elves. Ru le d in a ochlocracy, of O liga rch s and tech savvy mega­corpo rati ons, of underworld crimin al ru le, resistance in this m obocra cy is futile wh en your King ca n be your dish washer i n one da y. Intergala ctic best seller an d future O ligarch, K ronos fød t av Mø rke’skala soon finds out ho w his fickl e world migh t cha nge--with his help too. 
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!