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luna5898

Hey there,
          
          I just finished reading your story and wow, it’s really something special.
          The world you’ve built is so clear and alive, and your characters really stayed with me. As I read, I kept imagining it as a comic it feels like it was meant to be seen.
          
          I help writers turn their stories into high-quality comics, with art that brings every scene and emotion to life.
          Your story has so much potential to shine in this format and reach even more people.
          
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          I’d be happy to share my work so you can see what I do.
          Would love the chance to create something together.
          
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CrazyHobbit24

I read your story "The Moons Daughter". I think it's good, but unfortunately a bit short.
          I have some ideas how you could make the story longer.

LunaMoonSky15

@CrazyHobbit24 I'll try to do that with my next book The Sun's Daughter. Thank you!
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CrazyHobbit24

She might have some difficulties in her new pack, as she was so mistreated in her old one. If you're already embellishing that, the story is already longer. At the beginning, when she is still afraid of the boys' movements and they help her to put her past behind her.
            That sort of thing. Just a suggestion.
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