StoryWriter189
Hello.
If you wouldn't mind and spare some time, I would love it if you check out my book 'Twisted Love' and let me know what you think.
https://my.w.tt/6ao35cK5Kbb
LunaP02
@RuchB0 Hello I read the first chapter and really enjoyed it. It's interesting and has a mysterious atmosphere but however there are a few mistakes like incorrect spacing e.g 'shedid' but it's supposed to be 'she did' and the use of the word 'the' like 'jumped into car and drove' but should be 'jumped into the car and drove'. Other than that it's really enjoyable and I will continue to read it. I also recommend the use of an app called Grammarly. Another author advised me to use it and it is really good for editing. Sorry if this is too much.