JaredHart2820

Hi, so what do you think so far in the story. I hope you are enjoying it.

Luna_23411

@JaredHart2820 Sorry for not replying your post earlier. I'm been busy lately with school exam. 
            
            Yes, I am enjoying it very much.
            You're doing an excellent job with the story. The story is really interesting so far. I like how you've developed it. Can't wait to see more upcoming romantic scenes XD. I think the pacing and details are really well done. You are my favourite soul land bl author. Keep up the good work!
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JaredHart2820

What do you think about the latest chapters. I'm not sure if I should head in the direction I'm thinking of or just resolve things quickly.

Luna_23411

@JaredHart2820 I didn't expect that would happen like that.T·T
             
            But even if you choose that way,  I think you should give him a new family or friends. Maybe, give Shivay an amnesia. That way, he can live without feeling guilty or depress. And with amnesia, make him go to Sun Moon Academy. So he can has a fresh start.
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JaredHart2820

Thank you so much for your consistant votes. I hope you are liking the story. Would love to hear your thoughts.

Luna_23411

Sorry if I gave too much feedbacks. I just typed what is in my mind.
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JaredHart2820

Ravanna’s existence will be explained but she's not really a powerful villain. Just someone who thinks she has control just because Chaos favours her.
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JaredHart2820

@JaredHart2820 Okay... wow thanks for the feedback.  Well in this fanfic I'm making things a bit different and concerning why Tang San has not sensed what is happening, it will be addressed later on. Tang Wulin will appear in book three and will be the main character with his own flushed out story and character arch. Book three is currently on Hiatus for now so no need to rush to it.
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