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Alrighty so, I'm just going to rewrite the whole first paragraph to see if you like it.
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So one day I did what no other girl dared to do, talk to him, because at the time I was stupid and didn't know what would happen. I had asked my dad if I could help out with his practice. On my dad's team was Claudio's sister and the other coach was his dad. Of course Claudio would be helping because, let's face it, who wouldn't. What I didn't know, was that Claudio and my dad had become really good friends and that would affect my life.