TerraNova856

Hey! I saw your comment and thought I’d recommend my story because I feel like your reading taste might match this one really well 
          
          My book is called Velvet Cage , and it’s not just romance, it’s obsession, danger, power, pain… and the kind of love that slowly destroys and heals at the same time.
          
          The story follows Myra, a girl who gets pulled into a world she never belonged to. She’s strong in quiet ways, emotional, stubborn, and trying to survive situations much bigger than herself. She feels deeply, but hides it behind silence and control.
          
          And then there’s Rafael.
          
          Cold. Dangerous. Emotionally unreadable. The kind of man people fear before they even know him. He doesn’t speak much, doesn’t trust easily, and definitely doesn’t let people close. But with Myra, something shifts slowly… silently.
          
          Their relationship isn’t instant love.
          It’s tension.
          Power struggles.
          Protection that feels possessive.
          Moments where hate and care blur together.
          
          The story also dives into mafia politics, betrayal, hidden truths, loyalty, revenge, family expectations, emotional trauma, and characters who are morally grey but feel painfully human.
          
          As the chapters progress, the emotional intensity keeps growing. The characters are constantly forced to choose between love, survival, trust, and power,  and every choice has consequences.
          
          So overall, the book has:
          ✨ dark romance with emotional depth
          ✨ slow-burn tension and obsession
          ✨ mafia world, danger and secrets
          ✨ possessive yet protective male lead
          ✨ emotionally layered characters
          ✨ betrayal, healing and trauma
          ✨ intense chemistry and vulnerable moments
          ✨ a mix of softness and destruction
          
          If you enjoy stories that feel intense, addictive, emotional, and cinematic with characters who slowly break each other’s walls,  I’d genuinely love for you to give Velvet Cage a chance 
          
          No pressure at all,  just sharing in case it matches your vibe ✨

TerraNova856

@Lunar4eclipse Thank you
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Lunar4eclipse

@TerraNova856 
            It's not always about the vibe but also about writing. I will try the book once I am free, thanks
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RaktaRaaz

Hi!!sorry to bother you. I just wanted to say that I checked your reading list, and it was amazing. I have one small suggestion if you’d like, you could try reading Grihini. It’s a very sweet and cute story.
          Once again, sorry for the disturbance.If you see this message, you can delete it if you want.And if you do read it, thank you!

Lunar4eclipse

@RaktaRaaz No it's fine. I don’t mind getting recommendations.
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ayantikaaaa

@Lunar4eclipse I write in with my phone ! I edited the image at first from getting pictures from pinterest then made a collage with the help of inshot in a facebook canvas size ,then add texts and attach it to the chapter , you will see a symbol of the image in the chapters' writing section ! Click that open the gallery. Then add the image

ayantikaaaa

Add 25 Effective tags to get more visibility .
          Please try to update in a regular basis ( even in every 7/ 10 days) 
          writing 1000 words in 10 days is not a big deal . Sweety♥︎
          
          I can't eccept the indifference of the story .
          It deserves more!(ToT)/~~~
          
          
          ┣┓Love┏♨❤♨┑You┏┥

Lunar4eclipse

@ayantikaaaa I also write in my phone and also I don't use Facebook but thanks for telling me I will do something.
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Lunar4eclipse

@ayantikaaaa well it was not a the full chapter 1 as both the characters needed two different chapters but also I wanted their introduction to be done in one chapters so it is divided into two parts. And also how you add the characters' pov image? I am not able to add it  T-T
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ayantikaaaa

Hey , beautiful?
          
          When will the next chapter of your book be published?
          
          You could remember you asked for my opinion on your book but I wanted to give it personally because in a space like Wattpad where nothing is personal you could feel judged ....
          
          I am giving my opinion no judgement take it as my advice as your friend.
          
          First of all when I saw your writing it reminded me of my own earlier writing. I could find myself in you .
          
          So I'm being so personal here.
          
          Your writing is better than most other beginners in wattpad .
          
          Polishing is needed ( in which I am lacking for time )
          
          Make the chapters of more than 1- 1.5 k words to make the perfect mood for the readers.
          
          Use an eye catchy cover picture for the story.
          
          More interesting description needed so that readers will be interested in your story after reading the description. Make it secretive with slightly touch of future climax of story to grow interest.
          
          Update weekly / biweekly even 1 chapter ( boost logarithm)
          
          And I am sure you are capable of brilliant writing keep going .
          
          Believe in yourself and your capacity.
          
          And personally I think if someone have any quality they should polish it and express it in front of the world.
          
          So I'm suggesting you to keep writing!
          
          Good luck!
          
          Bye bye (⁠✿⁠ ⁠♡⁠‿⁠♡⁠)

Lunar4eclipse

@ayantikaaaa Actually I am in board class so I was just studying and I thought about writing later. Right now I open wattpad only for reading and also I use website because I don't want any one opening the app. So it will take some time to upload more and don't worry I like your suggestion and even I thought of changing the description and more longer chapters. Aside that I will try to add more as it difficult to write in mobile. I will try. Thanks for the suggestion:)
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