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LunarAquarius
LunarAquarius
Hello everyone. So, I've been experimenting with this CoPilot App by having it do constructive feedback on KI: Carrie Unleashed. Needless to say, I'm surprised. It might also craft ideas for those with writer's block. So, if you're wondering why I deleted and reposted the chapters with new content, that's why. You'll notice that it'll say, "This is a revised version of the original."
d_r1pt1de
Is the name strictly CoPilot?
Raven-Rhapsody
Hey, I got some free time today and decided to go through your story. I think I need to restart from chapter one. It's been so long I may have lost track ... Hope this finds you well by the way
Jezxith
Hey, sorry if this is a bother...
Want more read, votes and comments on your book?
Look no further check out the Astral Spire book club and gain more views on your books.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/377917158?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Jezxith
Far_han02
I'm genuinely engrossed in your writing—it's a masterpiece! Are you thinking of publishing an updated version or looking into creative ways to distribute your work to a larger audience?
Saramitra_
@LunarAquarius aye not an issue, regardless, its so refreshing to find you again =D
Saramitra_
OH MY GOD LUNA !!! idk if you'd remember me or at all BUT you were once my editor for one of my works, "Dead Laughing" and I was trying to refer you since you did such an amazing job at it... I am not too sure if you still do it, but either ways, its so nice to see you again!
LunarAquarius
@Saramitra_ Likewise. Rn, I'm pretty busy, so I may not have time to edit.
_chaotic_little_
heyy I'm so sorry for intruding...I just want to suggest you my story... You'll love it please give it a try...
I'll vote for you also...❤️❤️❤️
Thank youuu
https://www.wattpad.com/story/369661213?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_chaotic_little_
Raven-Rhapsody
Hey, do you still edit? I could really use your input.
Raven-Rhapsody
@LunarAquarius That makes sense actually...Okay I'll just keep practising...Thank you ❤️
LunarAquarius
In that case, I recommend using Grammarly to help with the sentence structure. As for finding a voice, it all depends on the main character or something you must discover yourself. When I started my story, it took me a while to find the narrative voice to make it come alive. What I do is often talk to myself. People may find it weird, but for writers, it helps find that voice.
Raven-Rhapsody
@LunarAquarius Yes I have Grammarly
LunarAquarius
So, I have started on a new book project called Fighting Game Therapy. It's like a parody of the YouTube series called Heroes with Issues. So far, I have posted this test project on Fanfiction.net and A03, but should I post the first chapter here?
Raven-Rhapsody
@LunarAquarius National Guard AT sounds intense... You'll get through it though, I'm sure... Just read the chapter you posted. It was a fun read...Looking forward to reading more ♥️
LunarAquarius
@LSJLovename Doing alright so far. Just surviving National Guard AT at this moment. Just posted the first chapter of the new book .
Raven-Rhapsody
@LunarAquarius I would love to read it...Its been awhile...How are you my friend?