@LunarAquarius
Hello everyone. So, I've been experimenting with this CoPilot App by having it do constructive feedback on KI: Carrie Unleashed. Needless to say, I'm surprised. It might also craft ideas for those with writer's block. So, if you're wondering why I deleted and reposted the chapters with new content, that's why. You'll notice that it'll say, "This is a revised version of the original."
Hey, I got some free time today and decided to go through your story. I think I need to restart from chapter one. It's been so long I may have lost track ... Hope this finds you well by the way
Hey, sorry if this is a bother...
Want more read, votes and comments on your book?
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https://www.wattpad.com/story/377917158?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Jezxith
I'm genuinely engrossed in your writing—it's a masterpiece! Are you thinking of publishing an updated version or looking into creative ways to distribute your work to a larger audience?
@LunarAquarius aye not an issue, regardless, its so refreshing to find you again =D
OH MY GOD LUNA !!! idk if you'd remember me or at all BUT you were once my editor for one of my works, "Dead Laughing" and I was trying to refer you since you did such an amazing job at it... I am not too sure if you still do it, but either ways, its so nice to see you again!
heyy I'm so sorry for intruding...I just want to suggest you my story... You'll love it please give it a try...
I'll vote for you also...❤️❤️❤️
Thank youuu
https://www.wattpad.com/story/369661213?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_chaotic_little_
Hey, do you still edit? I could really use your input.
@LunarAquarius That makes sense actually...Okay I'll just keep practising...Thank you ❤️
In that case, I recommend using Grammarly to help with the sentence structure. As for finding a voice, it all depends on the main character or something you must discover yourself. When I started my story, it took me a while to find the narrative voice to make it come alive. What I do is often talk to myself. People may find it weird, but for writers, it helps find that voice.
So, I have started on a new book project called Fighting Game Therapy. It's like a parody of the YouTube series called Heroes with Issues. So far, I have posted this test project on Fanfiction.net and A03, but should I post the first chapter here?
@LunarAquarius National Guard AT sounds intense... You'll get through it though, I'm sure... Just read the chapter you posted. It was a fun read...Looking forward to reading more ♥️
@LSJLovename Doing alright so far. Just surviving National Guard AT at this moment. Just posted the first chapter of the new book .
I really enjoyed your book The Killer Instinct. I found it ecstatic to read. If you feel like it could you please check out my book Reprisal. The link is below. Everyone else can also obviously click the link. Thank you very much and I really enjoyed your book!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/356259614?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=DeanS-C