Lunar_05

@ btsrupsfflove  Of course! No worries at all, I'm just happy to help. <3 Thank you so much, I wish you just the same♡

@btsrupsfflove Thank you so much that you read my message, understood it and gave your suggestions. Your suggestion helped me a lot. I want to say thank you again. You are very kind and and down to earth creature.I wish you all the best for your story writing journey  , good luck to you and I wish you get lots of readers and subscribers soon.... 
            

My third advice would be to really live into the character you're writing about, for example the main character, what's their personality traits? How can you relate and try to live into that and bring your own emotions into the book to bring it more into life? Make sure to describe as much feelings as possible, like if you were in that situation what would you feel? Is there anything you can use as a reference to make it more understandable to the readers? Oh, I almost forgot! Don't forget character development throughout the book! My last advice would be to keep the motivation up and keep writing! It may feel hopeless, but don't forget why you're writing. A story with many chapters is appealing to many readers because they can read more at once. It's like watching a show that's published 3 episodes and haven't published in forever, and trust me, I've been there. I really wish you good luck on your writing, and I hope you succeed! Also for some reason my emojis didn't make it?? But I really wish you good luck on your writing.
            With love, Luna<3

@ Nataly046649  Thank you so so much, I'll keep working hard❤