Lunar_Eclipse_Knight

Hi sorry can u check out my fanfiction and give me feedback? I am new and I need some advice...
          

Heyy, can u plss check out this story
          And give me critisism and points so that I can improve??
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/396321679

After you finish the book your doing at the moment, you can look on my account because I have a kpop idea book

When will you update?